- Put more depth into elaboration sentences
- Have a more relative intrpductory quote
- Have an effective restated thesis
- Have an effective concluding statement
- Have a strong topic to write about
- Make sure of proper grammer and punctuation
- Find appropriate quotes that fit theme of essay
- Have a clear expression of the main point
- Use an effective quote to correctly illustrate the main point
- Have an effective explanation of the quote relating to the main idea
- The original three dimensions make sense to humans because thats the way we see it on Earth
- It was interesting how Tralfamadorians see Time as the fourth dimension because humans don't see it like that
- How Billy talks about the Tralfamadorians AFTER the plane crash is significant because he could just be crazy
- The book really makes you think about how time works
- it is significant how when Billy's wife dies it just says "So it goes"
- How the story revolves around three different times in Billy's life is interesting
- i think it is interesting how little detail there is about what the Tralfamadorians look like
- i think it is funny that Billy is kept in a zoo on Tralfamadore
- i think it is also funny how the Tralfamadorians are green, what most people would picture an alien to be
- it is also funny how "zillion" is apparently a made up number but the Tralfamadorians live over a zillion lightyears away from earth
- I think that it makes you think about death and how real it really is
- i really like how it talks about scenes of world war II
- i think it is intrigueing how tralfamadorians have five sexes when humans only have two
- I think it is suspenseful when it talks about billy's friend's execution
- the book makes you wondre what sort of afterlife there is, if there even is one
- Death is not as important as we see it
- There could be other lifeforms in the universe
- Time travel can be possible to a certain extent
- we relive the significant times in our lives in the afterlife
- time is the fourth dimension of the universe
B- Are you scared of death?
Z- A little yeah
B-its nothing to be scared of, its just part of everything else.
Z-well okay.... did it hurt a lot?
B-there was nothing painful at all. except for the mere feeling of knowing that you won't exist except for in the past, which is what i learned from the Tralfamadorians.
Z-so if i thought really hard about a past memory of you, i could relive it with you?
B-Not quite, if you and i were both dead, then yes, we would be able to relive memories from the past. the really significant memories of our life.
Z-Thanks! now i understand what you mean!
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